Stumbled upon the Truth


From this ersatz shell, let me break out,
Lend me your hand, a shoulder to lean on...
Let the ruthless reality butcher me,
The bitter truths slaughter my futile hopes...

Exhausted is my soul of concealing
My devasted emotions, my dormant plea...
With my repressed enthusiasm,
Murdered is my inspiration to breathe on...

Allow this pain to injure my verve,
Let the dormant despair devour my heart...
Let me shatter, allow me to destroy,
Just be there to gather me when I'm done...

Pooja

23 readers opined...:

Rajdeep Satapathy November 9, 2009 9:59 PM  

hmmm............its interesting....and gr8 picturisation of ur truth.....

Prasannajeet™ November 9, 2009 10:03 PM  

fascinating work..... very intriguing... :)

visited ur blog yesterday wondering wen will the next one come and here it is......

Anuja November 10, 2009 12:49 AM  

honestly....it is AWESOME !!

Life November 10, 2009 11:16 AM  

Such dull words and helping hand brings question in my mind!

Hope ur doing good..

Words are wonderful its explains the truth.

Take Care
Vikas{V}

ANWESA November 10, 2009 5:49 PM  

The last line made me sit still for a while and think.......

i want to be... November 10, 2009 5:54 PM  

nice post..kudos!!!
hope it is thr to gather u...

cyclopseven November 10, 2009 9:30 PM  

A sense of frustration and rejection of life. I wonder why, ma? Enjoyed reading.

Pooja November 11, 2009 1:03 PM  

@Prasannajeet...

:)

i was brooding upon dis since long...

thanx 4 appreciatin'..

Pooja November 11, 2009 1:04 PM  

@Follow The Reaper..

thanx!

Pooja November 11, 2009 1:05 PM  

@Life..

yeah..m doin' gud..

Jus a bit worried abt future n all..how abt u??

Pooja November 11, 2009 1:10 PM  

@i want to be..

thanx!

Pooja November 11, 2009 1:11 PM  

@Cyclopseven..

naah..nothin' of dat sort..

thanx, ne wez!

Aneesh November 11, 2009 4:19 PM  

Intriguing words....
:)

Priya November 14, 2009 9:08 PM  

It hurts but we need to move on. Good one.

Anonymous,  November 17, 2009 3:46 PM  

hi pooja,
do u know it is a human tendancy to think that if other is wrong ,i will suffer.but we never think that if next one is right what will happen to him/her.sometimes we want something desperately but our life does not permit us instantly.despite counting the faults u should keep faith on your life.u can't get anything before time.

dormanting your inspiration is never good.may be your breath mean nothing to u,but it may be possible that your breath is an inspiraton to someone else.

this life is a test,the problem is that u give test before u read the chapter.

u have a very good heart.if u feel that u are not happy with your life sometimes.try to be happy for anyone very close to u.it turns out to be the most enjoyable moment of your life.always have faith.

Life November 24, 2009 11:40 AM  

I am doing good..thinking of future always keeps me bussy :)
Me still waiting for someone.....

sochna kya jo bhi hoga dekha jayega
kal keliye aaj ko na khona, aaj yeh na kal aayega ........!

very ture lyrics...isn't it pooja??

Take Care
Vikas{V}

prajyot November 24, 2009 12:25 PM  

nicely expressed the truth..!!

My Escape!!

This is my escape... The place where I reinvent myself... This reflects my emotions, my ideas that are moulded in my tranquility..

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