Stumbled upon the Truth
From this ersatz shell, let me break out,
Lend me your hand, a shoulder to lean on...
Let the ruthless reality butcher me,
The bitter truths slaughter my futile hopes...
Exhausted is my soul of concealing
My devasted emotions, my dormant plea...
With my repressed enthusiasm,
Murdered is my inspiration to breathe on...
Allow this pain to injure my verve,
Let the dormant despair devour my heart...
Let me shatter, allow me to destroy,
Just be there to gather me when I'm done...
Pooja

23 readers opined...:
hmmm............its interesting....and gr8 picturisation of ur truth.....
fascinating work..... very intriguing... :)
visited ur blog yesterday wondering wen will the next one come and here it is......
slaughtered!!
honestly....it is AWESOME !!
Such dull words and helping hand brings question in my mind!
Hope ur doing good..
Words are wonderful its explains the truth.
Take Care
Vikas{V}
The last line made me sit still for a while and think.......
nice post..kudos!!!
hope it is thr to gather u...
beautifullllllll......
A sense of frustration and rejection of life. I wonder why, ma? Enjoyed reading.
@Rajdeep...
thanx!
@Prasannajeet...
:)
i was brooding upon dis since long...
thanx 4 appreciatin'..
@Follow The Reaper..
thanx!
@Anuja..
thanx dear!
@Life..
yeah..m doin' gud..
Jus a bit worried abt future n all..how abt u??
@ANWESA...
:)
@i want to be..
thanx!
@Rahul..
thanx!
@Cyclopseven..
naah..nothin' of dat sort..
thanx, ne wez!
Intriguing words....
:)
It hurts but we need to move on. Good one.
hi pooja,
do u know it is a human tendancy to think that if other is wrong ,i will suffer.but we never think that if next one is right what will happen to him/her.sometimes we want something desperately but our life does not permit us instantly.despite counting the faults u should keep faith on your life.u can't get anything before time.
dormanting your inspiration is never good.may be your breath mean nothing to u,but it may be possible that your breath is an inspiraton to someone else.
this life is a test,the problem is that u give test before u read the chapter.
u have a very good heart.if u feel that u are not happy with your life sometimes.try to be happy for anyone very close to u.it turns out to be the most enjoyable moment of your life.always have faith.
I am doing good..thinking of future always keeps me bussy :)
Me still waiting for someone.....
sochna kya jo bhi hoga dekha jayega
kal keliye aaj ko na khona, aaj yeh na kal aayega ........!
very ture lyrics...isn't it pooja??
Take Care
Vikas{V}
nicely expressed the truth..!!
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